Judaism Non-Jewish writer needs help with story about Jewish Mythology

[RabbiO]

I wouldn't say that you are dumb. I would say that your post indicates that you don't know the difference between authentic Kabbalah and the non-Jewish bast*rdizations of the Jewish mystical tradititon. Jewish/Hebrew pendulums are not part of authentic Kabbalah. 

Maybe it is not such a good idea to write a story that depends, at least in part, on knowledge you do not have.