Judaism I built a small site to explain Judaism from the inside, would love feedback

[sp4z]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

[searchinmyroots]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

Hello sp4z,

At first glance, this looks very well put together, I'm enjoying what I've read so far.

Is there a way to subscribe so I know when you post something new?

[sp4z]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

Hello sp4z,

At first glance, this looks very well put together, I'm enjoying what I've read so far.

Is there a way to subscribe so I know when you post something new?

I'm really appreciate the feedback, that's a very good idea, i will think of something like e.g. newsletter, thanks!

[searchinmyroots]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

Hello sp4z,

At first glance, this looks very well put together, I'm enjoying what I've read so far.

Is there a way to subscribe so I know when you post something new?

I'm really appreciate the feedback, that's a very good idea, i will think of something like e.g. newsletter, thanks!

Okay, keep us posted!

[sp4z]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

Hello sp4z,

At first glance, this looks very well put together, I'm enjoying what I've read so far.

Is there a way to subscribe so I know when you post something new?

I'm really appreciate the feedback, that's a very good idea, i will think of something like e.g. newsletter, thanks!

Okay, keep us posted!

Added a newsletter option  , thanks for the suggestion.

[searchinmyroots]

Thanks sp4z, I subscribed!

[BlueBird2]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

It's a nice site and I sense that it is close to your heart.

I like the soft approach to the topics and that it's always only an offer to read more. In my opinion you could even be a bit bolder with more positive sentences.

[sp4z]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

It's a nice site and I sense that it is close to your heart.

I like the soft approach to the topics and that it's always only an offer to read more. In my opinion you could even be a bit bolder with more positive sentences.

I really appreciate the comment, thank you!
If you have any examples of feedback I would be more than glad to hear them out.

[BlueBird2]

I’ve been working on a site called Gilui: https://www.gilui.com

It’s not meant to be debate, politics, or kiruv. Just a guided way to understand Jewish ideas, identity, history, sources, and faith.

I’d love honest feedback: is it clear, respectful, useful, or confusing anywhere?

It's a nice site and I sense that it is close to your heart.

I like the soft approach to the topics and that it's always only an offer to read more. In my opinion you could even be a bit bolder with more positive sentences.

I really appreciate the comment, thank you!
If you have any examples of feedback I would be more than glad to hear them out.

First of all, I like the clear design and the pictures, so it's really only a small detail that I noticed. Some people associate words like "no", "nobody" "never" with negativity or probibition of some sort. I thought the text would be more pleasent to read if "no"-words were used less frequently and where possible phrased differently. An example would be

Not a feed to scroll — a building to climb. Every spark holds its own ground and rests on the one beneath it. Enter on any floor; no door is locked (could be: every door is open).